Theseare my first attempts at trying to create type within a triangular shape. The idea being taking the content of the phrase and creating the idea around it. I know what i want to create but I'm really struggling to get the idea in a visual way.
I think the image looks way too complicated and compressed, so you can't actually read it clearly. I like the choice of type face because of the angles and the it gives definition within the structure but a lot of the detail is getting lost and it just looks like a jumble of words, which isn't what i want.
I think it needs to be simplified if its going to work in a clear and functional way, its completely lost its readability and legibility.
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